Today's Class

We'll go over misplaced modifiers again.

Mistakes from last week:

Celia received a flyer about a workshop on making a kimono from a Japanese nun.
Celia received a flyer from a Japanese nun about making a kimono.
-->Which one is right?

Jurors are encouraged to sift through the evidence carefully and thoroughly.
Jurors are encouraged to carefully and thoroughly sift through the evidence.
-->Which one is right?


More misplaced modifier exercises:
dianahacker.com/rules

Here are some misplaced modifier examples:

Gregor Samsa learns that families will oppress individuals in The Metamorphosis.
-->How do you fix it?

Gregor Samsa and Stephen Elliott experience alienation, despair, and a longing for death from their families.
-->How do you fix it?

Finally, today, we are watching an episode of this program.